This is soooo good!! The illustrations are awesome. Best bunch of guys esp the one who jumped off first. It didn't even occur to him to jump off himself and leave you behind on the train. Amazing story.💗💗💗
Reverse DDLJ. So scary! That hero taking initiative to jump with your luggage was too much - it's all his fault really. I could totally see your clueless face at that point - Odiya instructions and then the jump. Hahah. But cool illustrations though. Way to go!
nothing short of a thriller - i couldn't touch my morning coffee before finishing the end! I like the lesson at the end of it the most. :)
Also, I'm Odia and hadn't the faintest that odin men can be impulsive like that. In my experience they are the most laid-back and chill people on earth.
Uffffffff goosebumps 😅
What a racy read, Savvy! Love the words and the illustrations.
Itna talent lekar jump karogi to balance to dagmagayega hi 🤗
🤣 Thank you Natasha!
This is soooo good!! The illustrations are awesome. Best bunch of guys esp the one who jumped off first. It didn't even occur to him to jump off himself and leave you behind on the train. Amazing story.💗💗💗
Thank you Alaknanda 😃!
Thriller! And the illustrations must become a regular feature.
I've missed your illustrations sorely -- these added more action to the action packed piece. Mazzaa! More of this pls
Reverse DDLJ. So scary! That hero taking initiative to jump with your luggage was too much - it's all his fault really. I could totally see your clueless face at that point - Odiya instructions and then the jump. Hahah. But cool illustrations though. Way to go!
The drawings, the drawings!!! Oooh I love this.
What a cool read! Not to mention the adrenaline rush of reading about your adventure.
thank you! 😃
Superb story and nice memory to have when you can't do any kind of jumps anymore.
Lovely illustrations.
true, true ! 😃
Omg Savvy, what a story! Thank god it all ended well. And your sketches wow wowww ❤️
nothing short of a thriller - i couldn't touch my morning coffee before finishing the end! I like the lesson at the end of it the most. :)
Also, I'm Odia and hadn't the faintest that odin men can be impulsive like that. In my experience they are the most laid-back and chill people on earth.
thank you Aparna! on the odia man being the impulsive jumper-- well I found one.
What a lovely ready Savvy!! And the sketches are too good😊you are truly a gifted writer. Waiting for your next book🤗🥰
Inshallah!!! Thank you so much ranu😇
Ha ha haaa this was incredible to read again! And the illustrations were such a bonus!
Wah, jaan hateli pe leke jeete hain...kya stories hain Teri life mein, so much excitement 😉