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Natasha Badhwar's avatar

You are a gift

That causes a shift

And fixes every rift. 😃

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Not The Wife Material's avatar

This was a tough one

But once it got done

It was fun, fun, fun.

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Antara's avatar

Mhanje ...

Aap aaye toh bahaar aayi,

Aapne likha toh hum sabko bhayi,

Bat-cat-mat kya, aap candy-brandy pe hi likhiye,

Aapki shaayri hai sachmuch lajawab. Sigh!

😄

Joking aside, was the prompt ‘sizzles on my tongue’? I really enjoyed the transitions from the funny to the serious to the sad to the joyful. And it all came together so beautifully. You are very talented, my friend!

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Antara's avatar

And please don’t wait until the next World Poetry Day to write the next one!

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Not The Wife Material's avatar

Yes the prompt was “It sizzles on my tongue” 😛

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Stuti's avatar

enjoyed reading, immensely !!! Thanks for sharing.

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Mumbai || Paused's avatar

❤️

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Nirnita Talukdar's avatar

Love it!

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Dipali Taneja's avatar

Great reading!

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